In some ways, this image is similar to one that I have had in my head. In my head, the person in the image has orange-red hair. Instead of being in a side-plank position, she is in a star position and kind of looks like the Vetruvian Man on her side. And she maybe even has a circle incorporated also inspired by the Vetruvian Man.
This logo may be too feminine overall. Both the figure and the fonts feel feminine. In order to play with the red hair, the figure will remain female so maybe updating the fonts can balance it out more.
Great! I'm looking forward to your revisions. This logo does look very high-end and I like that part. I hope we will be able to maintain that while incorporating the updates.
I do have a concern about the word "BY" in #55. It is so small I am concerned it will get lost in applications such as embroidery. Is it possible to enlarge it without throwing off the balance of words?
Also, can I see #55 in another color combination (without losing the awesome red hair)?
Great! Thank you! The word "BY" is clearly improved.
I'll have to look many times before I decide which I like best. My favorite feature about your submissions is the red hair on the figure so I want to make sure I do not choose a color combo that looses that effect. If you have any other possibilities with that in mind, please do share.
May I see #109 without the slogan? I like it there but it is so small that it will not be usable in many applications. Can the slogan be any larger and still work well?
Also, do #108 & #109 have the enlarged version of the word "BY"? It may have just been the font change but it does not look like it did after you made the improvements on that word previously in the other color variations.