PAR 4 PATRIOTSLogo Design Contest

I'll pass on re-instating thank you.

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this is the revised version. Your thoughts?

You requested a re-instatement for this design. I was not 100% happy with the overall look. the golf balls should have been above the shoes as well as some other minor details need to be addressed.

Normally I move on to other contest when all my work is marked not interested, however you have requested a re-instatement and I will upload a revised version of this submission.

I do not continue with a contest when my work is marked not interested, even small changes. Wil not make a difference. It's clear this is not the style you are looking for/

thank you for considering my work in the beginning.

Regards
Scott

Can you remove the other laurels? Seems busy

additional update

How's this? and I've removed the laurels from the bottom area

Can you remove healing Hoof Steps and defenders of freedom from the text?

How's this?

Okay, I'll work up an update. Thank you for the feedback

Scott

Can you remove the eagle, move the PAR4 above the word patriot and enlarge?