We that think you could be on the right track with your designs. It feels like this sample has the potential to be impactful, but we're not sure we are quite there yet. That said, It does feel more thoughtful and original than some of the other submissions. Reminds us somewhat of the NBC Peacock that is so nicely and cleverly integrated into their media brand and logo - its driven by colors and sensory perception - and ours should be as well, So your rendition is reminiscent of a familiar, strong and dependable brand. We would like to play with even brighter colors, in that regard. also maybe a 5-point star as well (you already have a 6-point star). Please keep up the good work!