My submission for your review and consideration. I have read the brief and reviewed the other submissions and comments. I have been working on the idea for the past few days to give you an outstanding option which is why I've and submitting now.
You asking yourself why this mark what make it standout from the others. The mark is memorable and eye catching, it's contemporary and old school rolled into one, which mean it has a long shelf life. The ND.B icon is just beautiful to look at an I know anyone who see this mark will remember it. I've kept the "dot" with the letter "D" which give the icon a distinguish look and feel, polished if you will.
I've done up a Business Card mock up and the design look fantastic if you'd like to review just let me know
Those are great as well. I like the "D" inside the "B" better than the other way around. #181 - #184 look really sharp as well.
I really like the white on green, but will likely select a more traditional green on white background as business cards might look a little too "modern" otherwise.
I'm sorry, could i see this in dark blue again? I apologize for being difficult, but my team would like to look at that option. Thank you for your continued patience.
#236 could I get a little line in front of "Attorney at law" and see that pushed to the right? I don't know if I will like it better or not, so leave #236 as well, please. Thank you.
main name kerning update..these changes will be carried over to the previous design both stacked and horizontal...rather than me re-doing every submission we should go with these on any further revisions
Can you play around with the blue a little bit. . . maybe a tad lighter shade? Maybe the blue used in #209, or whatever lighter blue looks best to you. Thanks a ton. You can keep all future updates solely with the #236 design.
For the overall design, I like the balance of #264 and the color of #280. Can you combine those. Also, it looks like you decreased the font size of "Attorney at law, PLLC" in #264, can that stay large, like in the #236 series? Also, I do not like the line to be thick. As thin as practical for the line under the name. Thanks a ton!
#287 Ok, you got me. I like the line a little thicker than that. . . let's go back to the line in #264, but keep everything else the same. Looks great!
emphisis...on my submission is the period...whether it's a denoting an initial or a statement in this case both. The period acts as statement meaning NDB period no other attorney will do when you need something done effectively as professionally no on else will do PERIOD which is why I am emphasizing the period the letters are about style and showing that the "period' means something
Can you make the "attorney at law" font size bigger again, like #287. I like the line thickness now. Once the "attorney at law is bigger", I am going to end the contest. Congratulations.