Entry 9 - Maybe make the N.......L.........B letters a little taller. Try .com different color.
Maybe use the colors, but a little darker, in #27 on #9 but wit no box around the words. I like #9
Try #10 with darker colors for letters and with a yellow pencil instead of a blue one. Also use the different color letters as in #26 but a bit darker.
Thanks your doing great!