We're trying to avoid too much look like film - because it is older. Please see if you can make the head look like a camera lens. Also, ichange the things he's holding to a clap board and a camera
Very nice. With entry #9, please replace the camera with a "director's finder." Here's a connection to see one on the web: http://www.filmtools.com/marvdirview.html It hangs around the neck just like the camera, and it would look good replacing the still camera and be more appropriate for film professionals. Also, can you put an "M" in the center of the lens? You might also experiment with "MMS" Thank you.
It's a little hard to see what the director's finder is. Can you make it look more like the photo of the guy in the "deep blue sea" photo and how it hangs and looks around the neck. It needs to be smaller and a little more defined like the photo. http://www.directorsviewfinders.com/#directors Thank you.
Because the line of the cord is along the line of the suit/shirt, it doesn't look like anything is hanging from his neck. Can you put the cords over the shirt area so there is white on both sides of the cords and bring the viewfinder up or down so it looks like a separate piece, rather than how it looks now as part of the suit. Thanks
1. make a version with the lens head smaller. (Keep the "M" the same size) 2. Make the M inside the lens white or make it look like it's a reflection of shooting a white "M" and it has a highlight in the corner.
Looking good. Now make #47 with a white "M" and shorten the rays on the sparkle so they are more subtle. If possible, try a version of #47 with two rings on the outer area of the lens like in the larger lens, just closer together. Thanks