Hi Tim,
Thank you for all the feedback it is appreciated and helpful in refining the designin reference to ranked 2nd this design is not intended to be inside an oval or other shape,,,I have re-uploaded the designs I have tried it but just makes it to busy me I prefer simple clean and effect design over complicated especially for your market demographic.
1. on dark background
2. on white
3. and black and white version is to show hwo this look if being used for faxes