We think we like the "kids" in lower case letters better than all caps. And we think we like using the red "s" better than the brown, but agree that it does stand out as a bit bold. The brown was too close to the orange color. Is there a way to keep it red but tone it down so it matches the tone of the other colors better? Thanks!
Would you show us different options for keeping both "L's" the same color but trying it with the pink, blue, green, and purple, using the other colors for the letters in "kids". Thanks!
Could you make the stem on the d a little longer? Could you also make the bottom of the kids word flat on the baseline so that all four letters are level?
Could you unstack the letters, keep the inside of the O and d as is in this draft? And keep the smily face. So that the inside of the O and d look like eyes?
Would you thin the blue outline without the white outline? Stacked letters version like this and unstacked letters version (just one line of text). Myriad Pro semibold font for Lord of Life Church.
I like that this is easier to read than #8 and #9, but I still like them better because of how they are stacked with the dot of the "i" also making "o" in "LoL"
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I feell the red letter S is too aggressive compared with the other colors.
My recommendation is to swap the red with the medium brown.
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2. Slight adjustment to the letter K
3. Adjusted the baseline for KIDS
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The horizontal could be used for web use where as stacked for merch such as tee's coffee mugs etc.
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