Not sure what #5 needs. Just something small to make it look a little more professional. Maybe an outline around the guy. Maybe a more solid blue. Maybe a little bit of sand under the guy running. Maybe a little bit of water on the right side. I like the fact that it is simple. So if you add the sand and the water, also keep it simple and small, not to over do it.
#5 i like that the blue colors are used more than the red. Him running is perfect.Really stand out, and is perfect for my message. The lifeguard master font really gives it authority. I like the red shorts. I like the rescue can he is holding. I like 90% of #5. Just needs a little bit of zing. I'm not sure what it is. Maybe an outline around the diver. Maybe a slightly different blue. The 4 holes around the rescue can, the inside color, try white instead of blue. Maybe a linny bit of sand and water as described above.
the highlights on #45 is good. And getting a lot closer to what I want. I see you changed the rescue can holes, that is the way it should be, it is correct. For #45, lets make the holes white instead of blue.
(1) #75 The runner is just about complete. The glare really touched it up. Only thing., lets do just a little something about his shorts. Not 100% sure on what it needs. Maybe make shorts a little 'stronger'. (2) The word, 'LIFEGUARD', try giving it a little bit of the same glare as the runners glare. May need just a touch, not sure. (3) Let's make the '.com' almost identical to #8, except bottom flush. Thank you,
1) the blue lettering "LIFEGUARD" is perfect. It actually looks like water, good.
2) I see you made the shorts a little darker, good. The shorts still needs something though. Try a white line alone the side of the shorts. Or try putting the word lifeguard in very small letters (on the shorts). Its ok if the entire word may not be visible, because the word may wrap around the shorts where it may be non-viewable.
3) Try putting the ".com" lower (flush to the ground with the rest of letters).
4) since now everything else is solid and strong and commanding, lets see if we can make the water and the sand strong. Instead of choppy and all over the place, lets make it a little more strong. Whatever strong means to stand and water. instead of choppy sand and water, maybe lines or waves that has a little depth and structure (or no depth or structure also). Let's also try seeing it without the sand and water at all.
5) the word "MASTER" . Lets see how it looks solid like in #86, or with a little bit of zing like in #84.
The entire word may not be able to fit. Maybe just "LI" Then the rest of the letters is beyond the view of the scene. Or do your best maybe variations of the word being horizontal and vertical.
1) The ".com" The the reflective line that goes through the ".com" lets see how it looks in the middle. Just like the words "LIFEGUARD" and "MASTER" The reflective line goes through the middle. Lets see if we can do the same for .com
2) I like the stronger orange color that you changed it too. It is stronger than the sandy color it was before. It is stronger and it matches more with the red in "MASTER" . I would like to see how it looks in blue. Please allow me to see it in blue with the reflective line going through the middle. Also please allow me to see it with the current color that it is (with reflective line in middle.