Example #6, I like the direction you are heading, but there are some things I would like changed. First off, we need a Las Vegas skyline. The one you currently have I think is NY. Second, I would like to see the van going towards the strip and not away. I want to give the impression that the clubs are being delivered and not going the other direction. Third, I would like to see a race car style/more stylish van with lines or something to depict speed and getting the clubs delivered quickly with maybe peel out smoke marks under the tires. I would like to see the van looking like it is driving so fast that it looks like it is maybe leaning towards the strip racing to get the clubs delivered; of course keeping some clubs in the back to show delivery. Maybe instead of the clubs in the van, have them sticking/leaning out of the back. For the tires I see them in swirls so it looks it its moving, kind of like the OCC logo or something similar. Sorry for all of the details, but I can see something in my head that I like, but cannot draw at all :). Good luck!
#19 Looking better, and definitley on the right track.
First, can we remove the flag from the back of the van. It seems to get jumbled in with the clubs and makes it hard to differentiate. With that, I would like to see a little more detail in the clubs/bag if possible. With this, the flag may be able to remain and not get lost in the mix. Or, maybe have the flag extend longer and/or start at the top of the van or around the front like an antenna, and can have a good bend to show the speed of the van.
Lastly, I am not sure about the Las Vegas text. I am not sure if it is placement, size, or what.... Please experiment with this.
Doing good, thank you for your time and submissions.
Good evening. Thank you for your e-mails regarding the improvements which you wish to see on your logo. It is good to hear that I have been able to at least present to you what you have pictured out in your mind. Nevertheless, I will be making adjustments with regards to your preferences about the design. Thank you for your valuable suggestions and hopefully, I will be able to submit the logos according to your instructions. Should there be any details you wish to add or other improvements perhaps after I have submitted the design, please do not hesitate to inform me so I can make the necessary adjustments right away. Have a nice weekend!
Looking good we are getting there. A couple small things.
First, This is a little nit picky, but if possible, would help to show we are locals to Vegas and knowledgeable. On the skyline the last "building" on the right... just right of the Luxor. That is at the Fashion Show Mall... Technically, that would be on the furthest left of the skyline. Would it be possible to move it accordingly and slide the rest to the right?
Second, the van is looking good by the way, can we take the text off the side of the van? Also, there may be a few too many speed lines now. I like the ones by the flag; however, we could probably lose the top 4 lines coming off the clubs.
Lastly, I would like to see #26, with the same skyline change above, and the Las Vegas text being below the image (in all white space), then golfclubrentals.com below that. I like the size and compactness of the skyline and all elements of #26, I just thing the Las Vegas text takes away from the artwork in this location.
Thank you so much for your time and work on this project. You have been very responsive and it is very appreciated.
Hey Ryan, We are still liking #29 the best from you so far. You have been very responsive and have worked hard, and it is appreciated. If you have some time... focus on this version, clean it up a little, and make it as stylish as possible.
Good morning! I am so glad to hear from you again. Thank you for your consistent communication with regards to the improvements which you wish to see on the design. I am truly grateful for appreciating the effort I have done to the designs per your instructions. If you noticed, I have submitted several designs which you might perhaps consider. Should you find the newest designs to require some more enhancement or improvement, please do not hesitate to inform me as I would be more than happy to accomplish them in the soonest possible time.
Wow man.... Great job! #80 is really cool... Love the clean up and progression. A couple small things... First, can we have the star section the Las Vegas sign just a little taller. It does not need to show the entire star, but maybe just a little more of it. Or, maybe with the next request in mind, we could bring the diamond down just a hair.
Second, we need to find a way to have the words "Las Vegas" stand out just a little more. I know it would be difficult to do a bigger font, or something like that; however, we are a little worried that people seeing our logo will think we are just golfclubrentals.com... this is not a mission critical thing to fix; however, if you can play with it and see what you may be able to come up with, it would be appreciated.
Today is a major holiday in the US, so we are working a short day. For this reason I extended the contest for the last time so we all had some more time and I didn't have to worry about this too much today.
I am still liking #80. The size and propotion of the Las Vegas sign in #80 is great.
I think the only thing that needs to be changed is the star above the sign. We would like a little more of it showing. Can you just bring the diamond shape <> down a little to show a little more of the star?