Great job on all of your submissions. I have a really hard time choosing my favorite between #3 and #5.
I think I like #3, as the Palm trees flow into the landscape, where #5 they float.
With #3, can you try and replace the mountains in the background with more of a Vegas city skyline? Also, the tree on the left... think you can remove that and in its place put something like a delivery van racing toward the skyline?
I like the simple color pallet; however, I am wondering if you might be able to add features and make it pop a little more by using a little more color.
You are doing great, and I look forward to seeing more evolution from you.
#17 is pretty sweet! Can we change the coloring of the golf cart slightly, and pull it backwards a little so it is not so busy right there by the flag? As for coloring, I am not too sure, there is just a lot of green, and it gets lost a little. nothing drastic, but play with it a little and see what you come up with.
Also, I would like to see the same version with out the golfcart al together.
Lastly, a similarly sized delivery van, further right speeding the same direction would be sweet if you can.
#14 is looking good as well. The ball trail is getting lost a little with the white on white areas... may need darkening, but at this point, iI think focus on #17 is the best direction.
Ketut.... Really hoping to see some more development working with #17. I think it is the cleanest so far; however, my business partner and I are not in total agreement due to the current #1 incorporating the van racing to the strip... Looking forward to seeing your developments.
So many thanks for your feedback, here i submit new entry started #33 #34 #35 #36 #37 #38 #39 #40 #41 #42 #43. My new entry also presenting logo on solid color, shading logo view, black and white for printing use. And feel free for other comment.
Ketut... wow, thank you for the different versions.
I am liking #33; however, I would like to see it with the text color scheme of the GolfClubRentals.com in #41 for both the Las Vegas text and GolfClubRentals.com. I like the color of the logo; however, I think I like the text White with the slightly grey fade for depth.
Or, mabye #41 with the skyline color of #33, and make the red Las Vegas the same color as the GolfClubRentals.com below.
I like the size of the cart in #39, but still not sold on the cart. You think you michgt be able to make a deliver van?
Hey Ketut... Great submissions... I'll tell you... The van looks more like a golf cart shuttle, and not really what we are looking for; however, with your design, it will not be the end of the world not to have a delivery van.
We are really torn between a few of your submissions (#49, #51, and #52 are all really good).
Can you take #49 and add the ball back in and the cart size and location from #39. Obviously you will need to color match the cart to fit the blue version, but I think that might be the winner.
Maybe do the same with #51.
We are having a hard time choosing our favorite between those border styles. Also, we are have a difficult time choosing between the grey skyline and the blue skyline.
Hope this help, and thank you again for your hard work... you rock!
Ketut.... Thanks for the updates... Liking #68; however, I think we need to put the ball and swoosh back to the original location. Also, I think we went a little to far to the right with the cart. Lets bring it back to where the back of the cart is a hair right of center on the pyramid.
The pyramid (Luxor hotel) is a pretty recognizable landmark, so we still want people to be able to easilly distinguish.