Really like the direction you are headed with #13. The skyline is great, and the simple yet saying a lot look is nice. A couple things I would like to see. First, I like the green grass for entry #10 and #11; however, lets put it to replace the arc on #13.
I do really like the detail in the golf cart; however, I am not sure the golf cart says rental club delivery. Would love to see your rendition of a speeding van or truck with some clubs sticking out the window or back.
Also, I do like the flag; however, it is blocking the stratosphere towwer in the skyline a little... can we play with placement, or maybe flip the skyline.. Not sure, as I really like how it is laying out.
Thank you for the feedback. I've tried something else #23. The clubs are more prominent so that if the logo becomes a signage, it will be apparent what the business is about.
I like what you did in #28. I am just not settled on the golf cart. I would love to see a delivery van in there in its place; however, maybe take out the speeding lines (I think it throws off the balance.
If you are unable to do a delivery van, maybe just take the cart out all together and see how that looks.
Thank you for your submissions and time on this project.
Blaine, Thank you for your work.. Would stil like to see if you could do some type of delivery van in the green section if you have the time. Also, I am thinking I might like to see the green section with no clubs in there... just green, and then maybe with a delivery van.