Khosla Property InvestmentsLogo Design Contest

Okay, thank you sir

Hi Oxana,

I'm sorry you were not selected as the winner. You were in first place for the first half of the competition. I think you got busy on other things, and weren't able to refine your design sufficiently. Hopefully, next time I make a tournament you will win.

I've made some changes to the bird design. please check

I'm still not super happy with the hummingbird. The even spacing/width of the feathers/tail bothers me. The rest is so "calligraphic" I love the thick/thin expressions of the nest strokes and the circle strokes - just not wedded to the bird.

Is there anything that needs to be revised?

Thank You. This is looking beautiful

Much better feathers. Almost calligraphic in nature...
Can you make property investments all one line (smaller). "Khosla" in black, "Property Investments" in red? Also a serif'ed font like others are using.

please check my revisions sir

You still there?

Still my favorite. You had one with a black half circle at one pint I liked. Can you refine the tail and primary feathers to be more elegant.

Black half circle

hallo, any revisions?

please check sir

please check my revision #247

Merge text of this with logo #118? Still not wild about the font.

FYI humming birds with curved bills are generally named with the word "hermit" in their name. Not the image I want to convey, LOL. The other hummer is better since it seems to be getting ready to nest. But we can work on that later.

how about this?

I am loving your logos. The titling not so much. Maybe find a way to have Khosla be one line and property investments the other. I prefer a serif'ed font (more classic) but I'm ok with your choice of font so far.

The hummingbird is a different and a unique choice. I love it. A little refinement in the shape would help (when we get to the next stage of contest).

Thank you for the feedback you provided. please check my revisions.

Regards

Love both of your ranked designs. You've got talent! Lovely to see.

BTW, LOOOOOOVE The use of a hummingbird. Please flip it so it points to right.

Not wild about the font style. Maybe optima or roman or something like that. Please use a commonly available font style.

Interesting. Love the movement, The design of the bird needs refinement, but love the simple movement of the nest