Hi there- I think these designs hold great promise. Entry
#11 and Entry
#8 look very good.
Could you try some alternate line art illustrations in the middle? An old-style typewriter, The LA Skyline, The Hollywood sign and hillside.
There is one other treatment I'm thinking of..."operation' in black bold letters above with a thin vertical line and the hollywood sign in white letters with thin black borders. Interested in exploring the black vs white comparison.
thanks!
J. Smith