Hi there- I think these designs hold great promise. Entry
#3 looks good and I like the black hillside used in #25 (but I don't want to stack the words on top of each other)
There is one other treatment I'm thinking of..."operation' in black bold letters with a thin vertical line and then 'hollywood' in white letters like you have done above. Interested in exploring the black vs white comparison.
I like the black hillside contour as well.
Thanks!
J. Smith