Thank you for your work.
I really like the typography in #22/3. It's clean, clear, clever and tells me the beginning of our story. I'm reticent about the color, however... can you please come back with a less muted, clearer color?
#24/5 - very visually appealing. Let me sit with this for a bit. My gut is no, too far astray. Give me some time.
Thanks, Scott.
Debra