I like #1 and #2 because the triangle inside the bowling ball looks like a "play" symbol and relates to our website because it will include many videos. The colors are also very sharp and appealing to the eye. #3 and #4 are a little too "fun" looking and we're going for more of a professional look. I would like to see more versions of the "play" button concept, and as far as the bowling ball, I don't think the three holes accurately portray the modern bowling ball. A sphere without the three holes would be better. Thank you for your time, we appreciate it.
One thing I would like to suggest is to make the dark blue part of the ball black, and the light blue part of the ball a little bit of a darker blue. That way you can take away the finger holes and still portray the ball as a bowling ball.
#19 looks the best. I like the shape a little bit better because it will be easier to embroider and silkscreen on t shirts. I really want ti get rid of the finger holes, though. Unfortunately, without the finger holes, it won't accurately portray a bowling ball. So I was thinking maybe adding a bowling pin, or doing a bowling pin only. Also, I liked the brighter blues better. I was thinking that maybe we could even add some bright greens to it. Thank you!
#19, #30, #23 are definitely the layout that we like. I would like to see how it would look in different shades of green and blue. Maybe make some with BOTH green and blue in the same logo. Or try a couple with the ring around the ball, different size balls, and try different pin placements or styles. Thank you very much, we really like your work!
I really want to explore a ball and pin logo. We really need to find a way to take the finger holes out of the ball. Without the pin or some pins, the sphere won't be interpreted as a bowling ball. Keep the base structure, but try to figure out a way to add a pin or pins to it without adding too much. We can even try taking the ball out and just doing the pins or a single pin. I really look forward to seeing more from you! Thanks!
#32, #33, #34 look the best so far. I'm getting a lot of good feedback from friends. We need to add some detail to the pin. I think if we give the pin a border, it will look better. Also, I want to see #32 with a bright neon green instead of the red. Also if you make the color of the border the same color as the swoop and the word "insider" I think that will also look good. Your work is looking very good so far. I would like to try some different fonts for the words too. Thank you!
ill be back as soon as possible, its nice to work with you. but im about 100 kilometers from my desktop :) i will get back to you with new entries. and then will let you know if i made it.
I'd like to see entry #30 with a couple different fonts (maybe Boulder, Antigone and Alor, with the same lower and uppercase lettering) and entry #26 with white pins with red rings.
I love the new pins! They look perfect, but i was in love with the little swoosh. Especially the 3d swoosh like in #50. Can we try a logo with the 3D swoosh, the ball with no holes, and the new pins? And maybe shrink the swoosh, ball, and pins to make it fit better. Also, Can you add our slogan "Bringing the pro shop to you" underneath the Insider bowling? That would be absolutely perfect! We all love your work, Jesse! Thank you so much!!
I really like #64. The illustration with the swoosh, ball, and pins looks great. I would like the swoosh to be a little darker grey like the one in #50. And I wanted to see what it looks like with the capitol letters, like #50 except I want "insider" to be grey, and "bowling" to be blue. Everything else we can keep the same. Thank you very much, Jesse. It's really coming together and we are excited! I hope you are too!
Would you mind adding the third pin to logo #72 leave "insider bowling" the same, I like that style. Maybe try one with the 3 pin logo on the side of the words, and the 3 pin logo on top of the words. Thank you!
Both #75 and #76 look really good. Those are my favorite so far! The only issue I see with those is the letters in "insider." I like the font, and how the letters are spaced out, but they're just too light. maybe make them a tiny bit more bold or darken the letters a little bit to make them stand out more. Thanks!!
I like what you did with the ".com" under the "bowling" but the line under "bowling" and left of the ".com" doesn't quite look right. I agree that something needs to be there, so I would suggest doing something like making the line thicker so it's as tall as the ".com" and having it fade from completely opaque to transparent as it gets closer to the ".com" OR try making the letters in "bowling" bigger, so you can leave the ".com" to the right of the word "bowling" like you did on #64. I like the font of the new ones, but maybe just stretch it out to make it taller. Also, I would like our quote, "Bringing the pro shop to you!" to be underneath the whole logo. Thanks!