I like the overall shape of the logo, but we're looking for something a little more unique and exciting! I like the arrow after "you" it accurately portrays the arrows on a bowling lane. Maybe you can do a little more with it? Also, "Pro Shop" is two separate words in our industry. Thank you for your time, we greatly appreciate it!
I like #11 much better, but it's still missing something. Maybe try a couple different shades of blue. Something a little brighter maybe? Also, I feel like it lacks depth or texture. I can't quite put my finger on it, but I definitely appreciate your efforts and hope to see more from you. Thanks!
Thinking back, I've realized that the shape of this logo may be hard to embroider on a polo shirt. So I think we need to make it less long. Also, we need to separate the white from the arrows and the white from the balls and words. An idea I have is to make the arrows look more like they would on an actual lane and stack the words to the left of the arrows to see what it looks like. Thank you for your time!