Inline Distributing CompanyLogo Design Contest

can you make this a bit more 3 dimensional so that it is not so flat?
thx
scott

thanks for feedback and ranking. here is the update more 3d look

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using 483 as baseline can you experiment with making one white line a bit short of the e?
maybe one white line at different placements?
thx
s

#487 #486 new update

i was not clear
make one line SHORTER (not so far to the right)
not more lines
try with ONE white line instead of 2 also
thx
s

sorry it was not clear to me. new update #490 #489 #488
hope i did it right. thanks

use 488 for new baseline
i like it
the red lines need a little work now
please do one without 3 red lines
then one with all 3 red lines no lower than center line
thx
s

latest update #491 #492 #493 #494
thanks

using 493 as new baseline
please make "distributing company" a bit lighter (not quite so bold)
also try one with slogan
"suppliers for tomorrows environment today"

revision with tagline #498 #500 #501 #502. thanks

lenapple,

Sorry I need to withdraw my entry, glorious kid claim he is the original and my entry rank #1 is similar to rank #2. Hope you understand. thanks

just read this
ok i will try to figure something out
thx
s

i will put 504 in first for now to give me time to sort out
is there such a thing as tie?
i like his line but like your e
s

another #506, #507, #508, #509.

i want the one that you withdrew so i sent a pm to glorious and told him if he did not withdraw his complaint i would rank him LAST!
the reverse lines have been part of my old logo for 25 years, he can not claim as his idea
i only asked you to reduce to one so that it better matches my old design
i told him that your "e" is more unique than his version of a line so i was more inclined to work with YOU for fine tuning.
i told him you did not steal his idea you only went by my instruction to use one reverse line
i will rank you #1 and him #2 if he cooperates
s

thanks, i told him too, but he continue LC against me. this is my entry withdrawn hope this help. thank you again.

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