I like your following entry much better... but we DO NOT serve pizza. It looks like a pizza... can you change that to is looks like our pocket bread? (Please refer to our website http://www.ikesdeli.com/wp/the-people/ and look at the bottom of the picture of our employee Isabel. That's what our sandwich looks like).
Also, some additional mock ups with the font of "Deli" would be nice, as right now we don't like the font. Depending on what you give us, you're ranking could jump significantly!