As a general observation...we'd like to have the "roofing" be the first word that jumps out versus the "Honolulu"...
Really like where you are going with this...can you please try a few versions:
Version #1 1. Please remove the "window" 2. Please have the "roofing" stand out more" -- perhaps a bolder color? 3. Try another font style inside of the graphic
Version #2 1. Try a submission with only the letter "H" in the middle - a STRONG H
Version #3 1. Please try also with just an "H" 2. Try a square design -- compared to the current circular version
#17 - can you try a variation of this one...strong HRC but so as not to get confused with a female/male sign? We like the look of it...something just not quite sitting right...perhaps the roof style?
#23 - nice rendition on this! Can you incorporate the right side of the imagery to be an "r" in a very vague way?
#23 We like this one. Please let us see what it would look like if you omit the roof on the left hand side. We would like the look of the roof, yet still trying to keep from looking like a residential home. Thank you so much.
Hi, as to your earlier question, most companies have separate logos for certain needs. like if you were to use #26 and #27 for fax for example you will be needing a flat version of that. likewise for white or dark backgrounds there may be a slight color adjustment needed. What I'm trying to say is that you can ask whoever shall win your contest to provide you with additional versions of the logo depending on your need. I'm sure all of us would be most willing to oblige.
#46 It has such a different feel to it...maybe if we did something with the colors. May we could try blending or fading from gold/yellow to black or vice-versa (from black to gold/yellow) in an upward sort of motion, in the same/similar direction as the arc you have. Thank you so much for your numerous submissions.