Hi Yavuz, With regards to the palm tree, I think the 'a' merging into the 'y' as a palm tree is too much. I think the 'y' should be clearer from the 'a'.
Hi Yavuz, The door hanging notice in #148 has been done previously by LateRooms.com and is more for hotels only, so I'll probably discount this one.
I prefer a smaller .com in the likes of #145 as opposed to #144, so I'd recommend keeping the .com smaller.
Bobby will contribute later today, who has a design background, so I'm sure he will give better, more specific feedback. With this, I'm sure you will work on a design that is a winner!
#148 Can we see this on a white background please? I'm struggling to get a hold of this one on the nearly black. It's a holiday after all and this feels too sombre as it stands. Once I can see it like this I will be able to get a better idea of the concept, as there is definitely something here that I like! Thanks, Bobby
Well done Yavuz. As ever, a load of amazing designs. I'll leave the final now to Bobby to work with yourself and the other 3 final designers and work up a winning design.
#208 I feel that the .com is too small here and this component is integral for the brand especially at time of launch. Can we please see an option with the .com in the same size and position as #147. Thanks, Bobby.
#208 Please can we have another version of this where the .com is in the space where it appears in #147 but the text the same point size as the word 'Holiday' is now. Thanks, Bobby. ps. we have decided that this solution is going to be the winning option, just need a couple of small tweaks first! Thanks again! Bobby.