Hi vuelta, I have taken over this contest for Corky and like the direction you are going... abstract palm leaf. What would you come up with if I ask you to make it more fun-in-the-sun? I look forward to seeing what your creative juices produce. Regards, Charles
Thanks for the entry. Meet with the boss today and it went great! The higher ups liked your entry a lot but want something a little more recognition for branding. They are thinking the use of the Beach chairs, an easy riding "beach" bike, beach umbrella or combine of two. For the font, we all agree that we need to go with something rounded or scripted to give it a more fun relaxed filling. Don't break up the name as we also own HiltonHead.com but that is more a business site (Its logo will be addressed also) and will have a more corporate feel to it versus HiltonHeadIsland.com which is vacation portal. Also check out my comment to all on the contest page. I am really impressed and excited!
Please let me know if you have any questions and again THANKS!
Really like your entries and here what is where I see things; On all, the domain needs to be straight or at the worse, HiltonHead and then Island.com, the the lather standing out. We don't want to blend the Hilton Hotel brand with ours.
Entry #106 - Chairs need to be larger, reduce the palms a little, slightly funnier font. I would like to see it colored up, #107 was a little to detailed or busy, how about straighter lines to show sky, water, land, thoughts?
Entry #105 - Personally, this would be my first choice... I love it. BUT I know what my associates are looking for and they are thinking something brighter and 'funnier'. Any thoughts on how we could make it pop? Of course the font needs to be livened up, we like the current first place font, it's unique.
Entry #102 - I also like this one as the hammock is unique, what can make it brighter, maybe a sliver of the sun at the top? Also this font issues mentioned in the other entries.
Spoke with my associates today and they like Entry #106 and agree with my comments; "Chairs need to be larger, reduce the palms a little, slightly funnier font (i.e. Entry #95). I would like to see it colored up, #107 was a little to detailed or busy, how about straighter lines to show sky, water, land, thoughts?
Same for Entry #102, brighter and font needs to be fun like Entry #95. Maybe make it a little horizontally longer, thoughts on that and if don't think so, I can respect that.
I still like Entry #105 but nobody else is a fan of that one. :-(