Thanks for the entry. Meet with the boss today and it went great! The higher ups liked your entry a lot but concerned about the palm leaves in the back. They like the use of the Beach chairs, but replace the palms with an easy riding "beach" bike or beach umbrella. Also for the font, we all agree that we need to go with something rounded or scripted to give it a more fun relaxed filling. On entry #73, they like the font but don't want to break up the name as we also own HiltonHead.com but that is more a business site (It's logo will be addressed also) and will have a more corporate feel to it versus HiltonHeadIsland.com which is vacation portal.
Please let me know if you have any questions and again THANKS!
Love the colors on the new one, especially with the Island being blue and font use on 94 & 95 is fun, which is what we are looking for. Can you do one with a bike in the background ie. leaning against the chair replacing the beach umbrella?
Wow, didn't expect it that fast... the type of bike we are talking about, is here https://30abikerentals.net/bike_rates.html (mens 26", 26" Unisex or bike w/child seat but without the child seat.) make it a little bigger and remove the umbrella. With the domain make Island.com larger as we have HiltonHead.com and want the Island.com to stand out more.
(Reference entry #117 #118). I'm sorry for not removing the umbrella. I have been thinking a little while that I think I lost the beach feel when I removed the umbrella. But, I'll try to remove it soon. A simplicity purpose to do so I suppose. Well, about the bike. To be honest I have tried the bike w/child before, but I am afraid it make it a little bit old school. But for a classic feel as shown on the typeface, I think it's a good option to give it a try.
Thank you for your guidance so far. I'll submit my revisions soon.
Bigger bike, without the umbrella and replaced with the sun to keep the beach feel. Same proportion on the 'Island' and '.com'. Please let me know if you have any other idea to add. Thank you.
In first, great job! Let's remove the sun, put a little sand below the chair (think, medium thick line tan) and water line right below that (blue, turquoise, etc, thinner then the "sand" below that.).
This will allow for the Island.com to be larger, as it needs to be.
The associates likes the bike so much, they would like to see just the bike with the sand and water. Also make the HiltonHead and Island.com much larger.
Not what we thought, sorry. We still really like Entry #133. Please make one version with the domain name straight as its read, HiltonHeadIsland.com and the other as Entry #133 is but with the larger font like Entry #141 but a little bigger then the bike.
Sorry, I must have miscommunicated... can I get one with the words unbroken straight across saying;
HiltonHeadIsland.com
versus
HiltonHead Island.com
Not sure why the bike changed from #133 to being small on #171? Use the bike as it is in #133, moving it to the left 5 pixels. Then make the HiltonHead and Island.com larger. I understand that it will push the words off the sand and water, try making the sand and water to fit over the Chair and bike only, maybe even making them slight thicker.
To summarize, I am looking for two logos; both using the bike & chair from #133 (but move left 5 pixels.) 1. One with the words spelled out and not broken. 2. One with the words broke much larger and with the sand & water shorter but thicker.