We like this a lot and would like it even more if it was a bit more polished and if the wordmark (speedometer) was a bit more realistic and applied differently.
Also, perhaps HPM could be done differently. My partner doesn't like how the P attaches to the H or the font.
not sure what you mean by "Professional and scripty swooshy type face just does not work well this design direction and that type of typeface doe snot have impact!