H2 Kinetics LLC / H2Ksports.comLogo Design Contest

entry 18 please attempt to make the H2K larger inside the circle and refer to the style i used on my web site www.h2ksports.com ... I like the font just not the structure around it

very much like the 4 part structure and structures that look like they are moving or like the sun

WCV

Hi, thanks for your feedback. This is another shot from me.

(This comment references Entry #20)

Ok really starting to like what you have put out there with the moving parts ... I liked the 4 parts in the circle in earlier but also like the sharper knives in #21. I am a fan of using marks in a circular pattern and you really have me considering using the circle instead of the 'o' in sports and using the same style separately around the H2K. I like the font or something similar I used previously at www.h2ksports.com. I would like you to try to place that thick font inside a large circle and attempt to create a little more movement (i do alot of work with cyclists, sprinters, pro athletes etc so a logo that shouts movement


other logos I have liked the way movement was used in the lettering http://www.newbalance.com/ and www.brine.com

other logos I have liked the circle http://www.cycleops.com/ (I feel like you are on to something with the circles you are coming up with.... sharper and faster?

I liked where you were going with this circle / sunburst ... might work to place the H2K in a rectangle over the circle?


also ... have really thought you have been close with the circles and really like the font in the sports.com portion but not liking the H2K portion. Looking for thicker letters similar to what I used at H2Ksports.com

thank you!!

21

like the knives in a sun like design ... or taking on a head wind

can you place the knives in a circular pattern??? like the sharp edges .. like a saw blades... but taking on a headwind

#9

how about making the tips of the 4 components reach out past the rim of the circle? does not have to look like a volleyball ... vortex is enough

I like the movement idea in #43 and #44

I will need to keep a similar font with just the 3 letters H2K in tact ... this I like in similar font to the one I am operating with Presently (Arial Black Bold Italic - stretched and pulled in inkscape basically)

if the attempt is to create movement within the letter it needs to be very subtle ... i very much like the idea of the Blue Streak you added

I also very much like the way in which the Leaders found a way to keep the letter in tact and build a logo around it ... this would allow for it to be presented a few different ways (Ex H2K, H2 Kinetics LLC, H2K Sports)

I would like to see more movement smear ideas such as this ... it really seemed to bring the letter to life

would something similar work inside an oval ... similar style to the Chevrolet impala logo?

Thank you for your positive feedback. I will try to develop those entries and resubmit.

#42 and #43 this is getting closer as it would look good on a white business card..... clean, sharp, moving forward fast

I might have to abandon the idea of 4 components (4 part system) which is ok ... I like the direction of this one

#43 The H and 2 might be better served being part of the movement smear .... just done make me look like capital one :)

I agree with you, I tried to working on it separately. Started with H2K itself. Between #45 and #46 , which one do you prefer? Or perhaps still preferred H2K style on #44 (with lines)?

Quick update from impala style
#47 #48

I read the instructions and don't think fonts apply to this so I will come out and say it... i like a squared numbering font similar to #4 which seems to look more equal and balanced when the H2K stands alone

be creative with the look of the oval and and small additional concept of movement that can be added but not crazy about the way the tail look s on the h and the k ... possibly both on the H or neither

people mention EA sports to me alot ... this is another example of a simple play on letters with some simple movement built it with a border around ... I think i am still more of a fan of an even Oval however

like #47 more and more but tails are too clumsy looking

wider oval

Similar look with tails off the H only?

New Balance uses a concept like this http://www.shopnewbalance.com/?s1=google&s2=NB+Core-Exact&s3=New+Balance+e&gclid=COiYkb72iaQCFdhA2godpQ0oHA

46 or 42 might work with the movement smear mostly behind the H2K?

also ... very important that the font is right

WC