I did take the time to review the project and your comments, you mentioned not being happy with current results which inspired me to a jump and participate I always like a challenge.
I am working in grey scale to start, colours can be added when we approach a more final design direction..
thanks for your entries, scott! 81 is the best from your submissions so far however the use of clouds isn't really desired in our sport. Clouds tend to mean we can't jump which no one likes!! try redoing focusing on nice weather, parachutes, planes, ADVENTURE! i want to look at the logo and think BADass and professional.
There is only 12 minute remaining in open phase. in order for me to continue at this stage you would need to rank one of my submission in the top 5. Only your top 5 ranked designers can continue in Top 5
#125 #126 GLS initials do not literally need to be GLS tjhe L can be an abstract form that represents the L as the Free Fall portion of the jump which conveys a sense of motion.