This is a nice start to the competition.

I would like to see some visual/graphic elements of people bought into the design so that the designs are not too corporate or "stiff". In addition I would like to see some graphic references to India be bought into the design be it through cultrual icons, colour or typography.

I have selected a number of logo's for reference to my comments of Aprils 9th, 2009, 4:41am. Please see below.

https://logotournament.com/contests/missourihomeowner.com/by/zie (Entry # 137)
https://logotournament.com/contests/personaview/by/carrion (Entry #1)
https://logotournament.com/contests/pipstalk/by/grafixsphere (Entry #99 & # 62)
https://logotournament.com/contests/croatia_discovered/by/quetzal_designs (Entry 8)

Just wanted to suggest that the .info doesnt neccessarilt need to be on the same line as the rest of the type ie it might look nice underneath it.

Hi Designers...

I am definitely looking for a modern approach to the design and I would definitely like to bring elements of Web2.0 Iconography. Please see some examples as follows;

http://www.indiabuzzing.com/wp-content/uploads/ist2_2338495_3d_ball_india_flag.jpg
http://www.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/5206395/2/istockphoto_5206395-india-flag-icon.jpg
http://www.webdesign.org/img_articles/13220/futu_walp_15.jpg
http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_h1AtqAA7avI/SSBFSNQR3eI/AAAAAAAAAYw/BssoniJ1Nlo/s400/screen9.jpg
http://www.techmixer.com/pic/2007/04/comic-iphone-icons.jpg

Thanks,

S

It might be nice to perhaps include the Hindi Translation of "First Home Buyer Loans" such as
पहले होम क्रेता ऋण much smaller above the type.

For consideration and a suggestion, certainly not mandatory.

"It might be nice to perhaps include the Hindi Translation of "First Home Buyer Loans" such as
पहले होम क्रेता ऋण much smaller above the type.

For consideration and a suggestion, certainly not mandatory. "

DOnt you think, it should be
पहले होम(Ghar) क्रेता ऋण
In Hindi Home is Ghar...

What is rude.....
Love all
All relegions are equal

Are these rude words??
or it is unprofessional??
dont we speak of equality in professional environment....

Dazzle...please read the comment before mentioning it rude....
and you should be sorry to remove that comment....it was a good message for all....

Hi Designers...

Thanks for the fantastic work to date. Unfortunately Im am unable to comment on each design individually as Im currently out of the country and travelling abroad on business - hence why I had to extend this competition - I simply havent had the time to review all the designs and make a choice.

Couple of general notes for feedback;

1. Ive decided to remove the words "Its Possible" from this brief as its creates a bit too much busy-ness. If youre doing variations please remove the "Its Possible." from the design.

2. Also, I prefer a square icon (similar to Apple iPhone icons) to a round icon. If you're designing a icon device, please keep it square if possible.

3. I prefer a "long" layout of the icon to the side of the text such as in #63 and the treatment of the font and the text is best used in #63 or #57.

4. I prefer black text or dark grays however this isnt mandatory.

If you have any specific questions please private message me.

Cheers and thanks again

S