I like the idea but would be keen to see the stylised person in a traditional pilates pose. I've uploaded a suggested one to give you an idea of what a traditional pilates exercise looks like. I think the way you've drawn your stylised person would suit that pilates exercise very well.
It doesn't have to be this particular one though. Are you able to show me another version or two with a different stylised person?
I think you were right - the bold looks better on "Pilates" as it holds the logo together a bit more.
May I ask you to make a couple of additional amendments:
#70 - could you remove the right arm (the one which is resting behind the person) and move the head to sit a little straighter on the back. Also, would you please change her back very slightly - she should appear to be sitting in a "v" with a straighter back. Could you please bold "Pilates" again instead of "Evolve".
# 30 - I stil really like this one. Would you be able to change the image for me slightly again in a new version. Could you take the shape which makes the legs in #30 and flip it over (turn it upside down) so it looks like a "v" with the longer leg of the "v" facing the word evolve to form the legs and body of the person. Then add the head back on top. Don't worry about arms - I'd like to see what it looks like without the arms.