en.zwoLogo Design Contest

Hi fgrafic,
we like the way you've combined the "initials"!
(even though the n and the 2 could be a bit more differentiated!?)

for the word mark we would prefer another fontstyle, something that fits to the curvey pictorial but is not to similar.

The overall style is going in a good direction!

Best regards,
derby42

Hello derby42
thanks for commenting on the design.
I will work on the suggestions.
best regards
fgrafic

hi fgrafic,
thanks for the revision but now i think the pictorial looks weird :-)
can you go back to the first draft and try to lower the 2 just a bit? just a thought...

thanks
derby42

hi derby42
ok! I am working on the suggestions
thanks for comment
best regards

fgrafic

small variations of the original.
Plus a new idea.

(This comment references Entry #22)

hi fgrafic,
i still like your first draft the most.
the shape is dynamic which is very nice.
your last design is too stiff so it would be great if you could focus on your first one.
maybe you find a way how you can push it to the next level :-)
> can you try to put it into another shape (circle or rounded square..?)

best regards,
derby42

Hi derby42
ok thanks
I will continue working on the original design in order to achieve the objective.
thanks for comment
best regards

hi!
thanks for the new entries!
can you also try to find an interesting typography for the wordmark?!

for the pictorial we would also like to see some web2.0 (glossy) variations.
thanks in advance... derby42

ok no problem
web 2.0 style and typographic variant definitions.
I will work on suggestions
thanks for comment
best regards
fgrafic

hi fgrafic!
thanks again for your designs!
the new font looks much better and the glossy effect os nice!
we would appreciate if you could offer even more font variations
such as serif, slab serif or even a handdrawn style!

could you also try to take the shape of the pic but colorize the n and the 2
in different colors and or nouances of the same color and overlay them
with an "overlay" effect?! maybe that way we can approach a better differentiation..
you know what i mean :-) ??

best regards, derby42

Ok,
I'm working on the suggestions.
to obtain the best results.
thanks for comment
best regards
fgrafic

hi fgrafc,
thanks for your new designs!
i still like the basic design of the logo but i see a little (or mabye huge problem)!
if we put the "n" into a shape, the form on the bottom, between the n and the (#32 the brown area)
looks like a big black cock ;-)

if you have noticed it once, you can't get it out of your mind if you look at the logo.
you know what i mean..!?

can you try to fine a way how we can keep the logo but get rid of that unexpected "effect" ??

thank you very much, and thank you for your understanding :-)

best regards, derby42

Thanks. No peoblema is my job.
I worked up two more entries on the basic idea.
# 90 # 91. Keep working on your project. thanks for comment
best regards