#59 This is an improvement. Like the incorporation of the beer mug, but in Miami, there are 2 types of bars, those that sell only beer and wine, and those, like us, that sell mixed drinks too. So my suggestion would be to incorporate imagery for that. Also, how can you show 1 or more of the following: that we have music (karaoke, live music and juke box), are open later than most bars (5am), and have bar games (dart boards, pool table, etc)
We serve beer, wine and liquor (a lot of our competitors only serve beer and wine in Miami). We also have live music and Karaoke on Saturdays which is popular.
Thank you for submitting. What I like about this first draft is the simplicity, the textual font, and the creative use of the apostrophe. Where it still needs work is that we realize the limitations of "Place", vs Tavern, Bar, Pub, etc but after 46 years, we aren't willing to change the name, so the new logo has to visually let a person know that we are a neighborhood bar that serves inexpensive drinks and is open later than most bars around. Can you work on something visually to this that makes it obvious we are a bar, please?
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I'll upload revisions very soon.
Kindly regards
Sebastian
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