Hi. Here's another version: #8 , #7 .
I've tried it over your green gradient background to be sure it fits (looks nice, easy to read, things like these). I had to slightly adjust colors in this case (mainly the slogan ones, it wasn't clear): #9 , #10 , #11 .
I'll try to come out with something new anyway, but if you have any suggestions about these, it would be really appreciated :)
Thank you,
Giorgia.