Can you try some variations with the font and lettering. Would like to see Sydney bigger. Maybe leave out "Dr Singh, etc" for now and just concentrate on ENT Sydney. Thanks
Re text: - I like the tapered line between the words in #77 - lets keep this. - Can you try Trajan Pro without "Small caps" - ie the E should be the same size as AR (like #74) - Can you try making Trajan Pro bolder - Can you try a different font for Sydney (like #74) - or "Aviano Sans" font
#67, can you try the centre cutouts larger. Can you keep the order of the shapes in the original format (the symbols represent an ear, nose and throat). Can you try the design C: http://sites.google.com/site/entsydneylogo/new-ideas
Thanks. Turning the squares into diamonds is not really working - it was certainly worth the effort to try out this concept though.
Re text: - Can you make the centre line a little bit thinner - Can you try "Sydney" in Copperplate Gothic font and in Gotham Bold/ Black - The "&" seems to be larger than the rest of the text - this should be the same size - Can you try the alternative I have posted here: http://sites.google.com/site/entsydneylogo/new-ideas
Re logo: -Can you try #24 with the new text -Can you try the original logo with the new text -Can you try the original logo with rounded corners -Can you think of some way to reduce the original logo to 1-2 colours
Re text: - I don't think copperplate gothic works very well - your previous choice was better. - I would still like to see "Sydney" in Gotham bold - The split line is not working very well at the moment (#95) - can you try it with less spacing between each letter of "Sydney" and more space between the line and the start of "Sydney"
Re text: - The full length line #98 works better than the split line #99 - Your original choice for "Sydney" #82 works better than Gotham Bold #98 - In #82 can you make the "&" the same size as th rest of the text - Lets keep the text from #82 (with "&" corrected) as the final text in all future designs
Re logo: -#101, can you make the squares closer together -#101, can you try a tapered white line between the colours like #81 (thin at one end and thicker at the other - but not with the arrows in #81) - Can you try #56 with the final text
Re #106 -Can you try making the white lines thicker in the thick parts, while keeping the thinnest parts the same. -Can you also try #106 in one colour
Re text - can you try the line between "ear nose and throat" and "sydney" a bit thinner
Re text: Lets keep the thinner line between "ear nose and throat" and "sydney" - i want to use this in all future designs
Re colour: I like the colour in #109
Re logo: -Can you try #105 with thicker white lines -Can you try #103 with the final text and the colour in #109. The lighter colour should be the same as #109, just paler. -Can you try #102 with the final text and the colour in #109. The lighter colour should be the same as #109, just paler. -With #102, can you try making the angle of the nose slightly more acute (ie - keep the tip where it is and move the top and bottom points very slightly to the right)
Can you keep the text the same as in #109 - ie "Sydney" in the original font, Not Gotham, with the thin line between "ear nose and throat" and "sydney"
Can you use the colour in #109 as the main (dark) colour in #102 and #103, with a lighter version of the colour as the second colour.
-With #102, can you try keeping the tip where it is and move just the top point very slightly to the right, but leave the bottom point alone.