Hey Brian,
With entry
#157, we like the new shape of the marlin compared with #137. However, would you mind playing with the marlin a little bit so we don't see his tail fin coming out of the water. As it's so small it sort of distracts our eye.
With entry
#156, do you think we should play with the placement of the marlin a little bit to show the whole fish rather than it being cut off by the letters?
Also, we think you were right with your original alignment of "Marine & Outdoors" to be in line with "Coastal". Would you mind changing back, please?
Thanks heaps for reworking your designs with our feedback. Much appreciated.