HERE'S MINE. I HAVE TRIED TO COME P WITH A TYPOGRAPHIC DESIGN THAT COULD BE MANIPULATED IN MANY WAYS AS PART OF A BRAND STRATEGY. WITH A MORE BESPOKE LOGOTYPE
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Entry #164 #163 : I don't think these two concepts are really what we are after. Doesn't quite have the feel. Entry #159: I don't like the gradient treatment of this one specifically. Entry #161: I think this one is quite hard to read as you don't immediately see the CG. Not a big fan of rainbow type colors for our project, but I appreciate this is a current trend. Entry #158: As with #161, I find the CG harder to read. I do like what you are trying to do with the lines though. Might be some potential here. The typeface is not quite there for me. Entry #162 and #160: I do like what you are trying to do with the lines as it has an up to date, if not 70's feel to it. I prefer the clean look of the typeface on entry #162.
Overall I think there is some potential with the way you are using the lines, but I'd like to see the CG made so it's easier to read.