Hi kib647,
These comments are in reference to your new concepts (Entry
#22 to
#33). The font is more contemporary looking which is good, but I don't think the overall look of this concept is really what we are after. Specifically the mark, which we would like to be more graphical and organic and nature. I would reccomend taking a look at the PDF link we have referenced in our contest brief. This should give you a good idea of the style we are after.
Also, to ensure you don't spend too much time on each concept, I would reccomend only submitting 1 or 2 examples from a particular concept. If it's something we think id workable, we can have you develop more iterations. We will only be ranking 1 logo from each concept.
Thanks and looking forward to seeing more concepts.
Cheers,
Jeff