#2: After thinking about this one, which is still our favorite so far, I think we have a little problem with the island. We had to look twice to process that it was meant to be an island. Maybe soften the edge, or show some wavelets or something. Or maybe connect it to the foreground so that it is "on" the same beach as the palm tree?
Also, a comment I thought I posted this morning about #2 that doesn't appear (????), would it be too busy to suggest a sailboat or two approaching the island suggested by a curve of sail?
Ref Entry number 10. Still the leader because of the bright colors, and the clean presentation of the business name. I like the contemplative effect of the island off to the side. I like the improvements. I think maybe the birds are a bit big, and I wonder if it might look better with the boat on the left sid approaching the island. Also, perhaps a wisp of steam from the HOT cup? You are, however getting a little competition!