Thanks for the submissions. I really respect your work. Unfortunately I think they are slightly missing what I'm looking for. I like #66 particularly.
1) I want the colors to be more subtle, simple and unisex. These look a little too bright and feminine. 2) I want the text, "BrightersSelf" (please remove .org), to be the main focus, with the image there to support the text. Maybe even a logo with all Text, or an image built into the text. 3) I don't want the the picture to capture all the attention. Maybe something a bit more abstract and without the "image" of a person. See ranking #2. 4) If you include an image, please place beside the text, not on top. Then it will take away all the attention.
Could you try one more variation? Could you replace the "Self" in entry #71 with "Self" in entry # 70. So you would have the "Self" with the person-S pushing up against the Orange Sun. At the same time, you could make the edge of the Sun a little bit thinner to maintain correct proportions and balance.
Thank you very much for the feedback. I just submit some variation designs, hope you love them... Please let me know if you have any request to make it better.