# 1. This is a great beginning however , it must have a Bi-line giving a brand positioning statement ... in the brief I mentioned it ... anyone who sees this will wonder what it is and what I do . However if there is a by-line... inspiring people and driving business results ... look at the brief and why I do and make sense of it under International ... otherwise it is great beginning ... and the 4 heads are a bit hidden because the silhouette show and might mean a different thing which is quite not visible ... thanks