I just emphasized the cracks, gaps and holes being block and insulated. The "liquid"-looking thing (abstractly presented) is the solution to these cracks. You cover, patched them up for better insulation.
On enrty 17 could you make the green background sphere complete (green earth) with the white bubble inside offset from center as you have it ( commercial & residential structures + sun). work on making the residential structure in the forground a little more pronounced.
On entry 6 could you remove the white/grey shpere on the botton making the green "fence" around the "community". Maybe the green fence has arrow points.
We like where you are going with both 19 & 22. Could you make all letters lower case on both as a trial and on 19 add some faint longitude aand latitude lines in the green sphere.
Hi, thanks for the feedback. Someone just sent me a PM regarding the use of the SUN in the design which is his idea and is NOT written in the brief. I'm getting the opinion of the community in the designer resolution forum whether to w/draw my designs with the sun incorporated or not. In the meantime, i'll be submitting designs w/o the sun.
On entry 27 can you try making the globe / circle less heavy and the buildings more dominant?
On entry 22 can you try reducing the number of commercial buildings and make each building bigger? I think in some uses the buildings may mesh together too much and won't look distinct. Can you also try to blend the residential roof line more with the style of the commercial buildings? Your creative solutions for these suggestions will be interesting to see.
Regarding entry 27 would you please adjust the range of colors in the commercial buildings to gradients of blue, the dark green lines on the globe to white and the word ‘retrofit’ to same blue gradient as is in the building. The goal of this request is fewer colors
Regarding entry 22 please adjust the ‘BE retrofit’ text and color as results in the above request. Also please adjust the ‘waste’ (middle section) of the commercial buildings so that they don’t sweep in so much. One person viewed them as a cooling tower for a nuclear power plant.
The blue font was distracting - the two ranked versions are our favorites. Entry #38 with the buildings more pronounced and your original concept on the shrinking buildings. Can you try some darker shades of blue in entry #38 to stay on a blue scale and change the "be" to lowercase on Entry #22.