Hi, great start & the first. If you could try one that has the same font as thyroid sexy & less butterfly looking. It's very pretty, but looking for clean BB w straight lines that match font. Can't wait to see your update and please ask any questions.. Look up Restoration Hardware or William Sonoma feel. Very classy & clean. Thank you
I like it.. closer!! :) Font is better, maybe even a little more simpler. I like the (skincare font, perfect).., but would like to see the BB's not to necessarily be a butterfly that's so pronounced. Much more subtle & more to represent the uppercase BB then wings. Somewhere in the middle. Actress Brooke Burke has a cool design of B's on her logo you can look at. I should have posted that link for all to see. Hope this helps as were getting close. Also, maybe lose the antenna's on the butterfly to see what it looks like. I want people to see the creative BB's and see the butterfly without an actual butterfly. Thanks for your talent! G
Also, try one with regular full on UPPERCASE B's back to back in blue with simple thin lines w/ antenna for butterfly effect. one each way so I can see the difference. :))
okay! loving it..... notes, just for me to see. Make the BB's the same as the font used in the current version of #2 Bare it Beautifully. less butterfly looking. Try lowercase with - bare it beautifully - in the same font you're using in uppercase. Love the clean lines you put in. Worth a look. thx hope you're getting this! lol I think the BB in the font will soften it w the lines in the middle and circle that represents the it in the name.
I've ranked my favorite!! #1 please work with that font, change the BB's to B font you're using in the title logo. thanks you! Love everything about the logo, with the lines thin font etc....
I still love 1st place. I'll try to explain exactly what I'd like changed from your 1st place design, which was entry #3.
Please try one thin line between the B's with the same hallow circle above it. Two lines made it feel heavier. I love the line between skincare, it softens it (don't change that!) I did some research for uppercase B's that we liked. I LOVE a font called (Hilton Serif) you can google it and see what kind of BB's I'm looking for. We can try it in different sizes. I had my colleagues look at my 1st place choice and these were some of their notes as well.
So, keep the same feel and look as entry #3 (1st place), but one line between the B's instead of two and change the font of the actual BB's themselves to Hilton Seif.. It's a thin font, so depending on how thin the B's are is where we can work on how thick the line should be in between them. I hope you're understanding these notes. Sorry so many, but it has to be perfect and not look like a butterfly. The B's with the line and circle dot will be enough to give people the hint. Thank you --- please write me back with ANY questions.
What happened to the original #3 entry that I put in 1st place! It's my favorite... The ones you submitted aren't working. I liked the first place one earlier the best with the font etc
I found it.. working from my phone sorry.. Darn it all, I wish I was there to talk to you.. ugh! It's looking too medical. I don't want a butterfly look. maybe try without the circle on top...I'm not giving up on you we all love your work, this is a huge skincare launch and it needs to be perfecto!
Maybe try 1st place with a line as thin as the line by skincare with no circle! Have the line a tad bit longer then the BB's. Because everything else font etc is perfect. It's just too thick and chunky looking. Make the line thin that simply separates them. No butterfly's. Thanks, I'd like to see you win this as you've done so much work.
That's awesome! In first place... Thank you.. I've asked others and they thought to at least try one that's different.. You know the Logo Tournament logo the L in the box? I was thinking it would be cool to try the blue B in a white box lined with light black and a tiny shadow of blue. Then the same font and text from your 1st place. It's just playing with another cool clean idea. Try the box plain, maybe trying an upper & lowercase B ! I'd lie to see you do it as you've been the best! Thank you