Yes.....this is getting better. Very well done. Is there a way to keep the bear, and sheep, I think those are good. Maybe flipping the salmon making him a little smaller so that the tail is the south east side of the state and the main body laying under the bears head incorporating it to make it the western peninsula? Would pushing the bears angle of the mouth down toward the salmon(slight counter clockwise turn)? Maybe that could clean it up to make it less crowded?Keeping the design with the bear sheep and salmon, with a light outline of the state boundary? I think you have some great ideas here, you are very talented.