This is really interesting too. I like that the arrows are meeting in one place; it suggests some alignment. However, I'd like to show that we're not only aligned but then making progress into the future (this makes it feel like we are going to meet in one place and then stop).
I like this concept of the chains of circles representing evolution, although the circular arrangement of the two arcs makes me feel like we are spinning in place, rather than evolving in a new (coherent) direction.
This is a beautiful graphic, although it has a lot more fine detail than the other logos in the organizational family (Comcast corporate logo, and the Core Application Platforms logo I attached).
I like the use of all the palette colors in the graphic here, and the graphic is really unique. I find a little mismatch between the font choice for "SST" and this graphic--I'm not sure I can articulate it, other than the font seems a little "plainer" than the graphic. Regarding the graphic, I'm not quite sure what to make of it--I find it attractive, although not as symbolic as I'd like; it doesn't strongly evoke enough of the department's mission of acceleration/evolution/transformation for me.
The graphic here is interesting, although I think the amount of black vs. color in the graphic doesn't make this feel as friendly as some of your designs that use black more sparingly. Is there a way to adapt the design to give a stronger sense of evolution/progress/acceleration?
Again, prefer some of your other designs that use more of the color palette. The "flattened 3d" sphere is an interesting part of this design. Could it be adapted to strengthen the sense of left-to-right movement? I get a subtle sense of that right now, but would like a stronger sense of acceleration/progress from the graphic. Also, I wonder if other font choices (maybe with a slant?) could also strengthen that sense.
I enjoy the shape choices here, by the way. I like the use of negative space in the middle of the graphic. It looks pretty cool, although it doesn't resonate strongly enough with the mission of the group for me. Just wanted to make sure you knew that I thought these looked good generally. :)
I prefer some of your other designs that use more of the color palette to this one. The design here has a negative-space "S", which I find interesting, although it doesn't stand out strongly enough for me, and doesn't suggest enough acceleration/evolution for me.
I like the use of the full color palette here, again. This feels a little closer to the "family" of the other related organizational logos (the Comcast corporate logo and the Core Application Platforms logo I attached to the contest). Do you think the graphic could be adapted to provide a greater sense of acceleration/transformation/evolution?
I like the use of the full color palette here, although the graphic is a little too abstract, I think; it doesn't evoke a strong enough sense of acceleration/evolution/transformation/speed.
This is my other favorite of the designs you've posted. I like the connected large and small colored squares: feels like "evolution/transformation" to me. I wonder if there is a different arrangement that has alignment in one direction, so as to give a sense of overall progress/acceleration?
I appreciate the use of the full color palette in this design. I find the graphic attractive, but wonder if there is a way to evoke more of a sense of acceleration/evolution/speed?
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Please check #231 #232 #233 #234 #235 with other font options.
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I made revisions. Please check #132 #133 #134 #135 #136 #137 #138. How about with them?
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