The black background, silver gradient and thin font all add to the "elegance" factor and because it is a bit dark it may seem a wash but the thicker the font, the less elegant. I can also try to put it all one one line and see how that looks.
I submitted a straight black on white background with no gradients and 2 other options. we can always play with colors, thats the easiest thing to change. look forward to your feedback. thanks!