The Running TartLogo Design Contest

entry #29 - very cute!!
love the pie - finally someone looked at my sketches :)
not what i was expecting for the text but i do like it.
not sure of the offset of the pie - maybe try it in the middle?

Hello kelsojoy.

Thanks so much, will do up some variations for you to see.

Melody

Hi Melody
thanks for your updates. i think i still prefer your original entry.
the new ones i like are entry 51, 52 and 53.
49 and 54 are too curly and look like i could have done it myself on microsoft word.
is there any chance you can make the text from shoelaces?
otherwise can you use a text similar to the original entry that is a little more random (maybe text width etc a bit more mixture of fat and skinny?)

also one other comment - maybe try and get the 'running' to be a bit more dimensional - using 2 colours rather then one as it looks a little flat.

thanks

Thank you kelsojoy, will do up some alterations for you to see.

Melody

thank you for all the suggestions you have put forward.
the four i have kept current i like best.
i am tempted to go back to the first example with the pie off centre.....
could you possibly experiment with a few other fonts - i saw you have put a shoelace into the design but not as the text.....

Thank you for your additional feedback. Will do up some more samples with different fonts for you to see, and try the shoelace in the text.

Thanks so much
Melody

loving the image on #93..... can you play with the text - back to the simple black and orange for comparison?
and can you also look at encorporating a circle into the design so i can compare it to the other designs?

thanks

Hello kelsojoy, I am not sure how I can post new design as there is no submit button.
I will contact admin and ask.

Thanks so much
Melody

Hi Melody

thanks for the new revisions - some great stuff in there....
my favourite at the moment is #135
i also like #140 and #138
135 - are you able to slightly darken the yellow to a more orange/yellow?
with 140 - i like the whole pie but could you try it without the white on top? maybe berries or something so it looks more tart like? and darken up the text to a more orange?
and with 138 - are you able to make the pie a little bigger as it was #93?
just some suggestions.....
i also really like #134 - colours are very cute - just a little worried how they might transfer to labels etc.

thanks

and one last comment - the steam from the tart - i think that looks best in the brown :)

Thank you kelsojoy, will fix up the alterations for you to see, and change the steam to the brown

Melody

Hello kelsojoy, I apologize that there will be a delay in posting the new versions, I have been put in logo court and am unable to post.

Sorry for the inconvenience, will post more revisions as soon as possible.

Thank you
Melody

the berries in 142 are very cute thank you.... would you be able to try that style of cake in one of the round designs to see how it would work - or a slice of a berry tart?
the updated other designs had colour in the middle - are you able to take 135 and make the yellow a bit more orange and leave the background white? and make the pie steam a bit darker brown?
and also if you could look at making the pie crust a tiny bit thinner for a comparison?

and if you could take 134 and try it with a white background?

thank you for your patience :)

Hello kelsojoy, thank you for all your comments. I will try to fix up as much as I can with the time still available.
With our time difference I have only just started my day.

Thanks again Melody

Hello again kelsojoy, I hope I did all the alterations you wanted to see. Please feel free to ask if I have missed anything.
Thanks so much again
Melody