Contests > Analytics In Focus > Designs by wookasheen
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United StatesSeptember 24th, 2009, 8:58pm
wookasheen,
I just recently learned of the ability for me to send messages directly to the designers, so I apologize if you haven't heard about my opinions on your logo before now. I really like the idea of having the A be made in an axis. In the work that I do, we often have an axis, although our graphs usually start at the zero,zero point and curve downward (see http://www.math.ucdavis.edu/~brad/teaching/12/xnimg/xn34.png). I would also like to see if this graphic could be used to replace the A at the beginning of the logo -- so that the entire design is more landscape.
More briefly -- you are definitely on to something, and I do hope to see more ideas / variations from you.
Thanks,
Phil
I just recently learned of the ability for me to send messages directly to the designers, so I apologize if you haven't heard about my opinions on your logo before now. I really like the idea of having the A be made in an axis. In the work that I do, we often have an axis, although our graphs usually start at the zero,zero point and curve downward (see http://www.math.ucdavis.edu/~brad/teaching/12/xnimg/xn34.png). I would also like to see if this graphic could be used to replace the A at the beginning of the logo -- so that the entire design is more landscape.
More briefly -- you are definitely on to something, and I do hope to see more ideas / variations from you.
Thanks,
Phil
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September 25th, 2009, 10:06am
H , thanx for good feedback, here is edited version. Please tell me if you want to see this image in higher resolution, so I can upload it on some other site. Best regards. Wuk
(This comment references Entry #20)
(This comment references Entry #20)
September 25th, 2009, 10:40am
Wuk,
Excellent edit. I'd love it if you could make the colors darker (to make them stand out more).
Is there a way to make the first A a little more obvious an A? Maybe shadow or thicken the piece of the line as it passes through the A? A little modification may make it more obvious. I really liked the dotting of the i.
Great work,
Phil
Excellent edit. I'd love it if you could make the colors darker (to make them stand out more).
Is there a way to make the first A a little more obvious an A? Maybe shadow or thicken the piece of the line as it passes through the A? A little modification may make it more obvious. I really liked the dotting of the i.
Great work,
Phil
September 25th, 2009, 3:35pm
Wuk,
I think you have definitely hit on the idea for the chart. I really like #28, it has good colors, the axis, and everything else I think it needs. I really like the concept, and I can't think of anything else that would improve it.
Thanks for experimenting with other variations, too. #27 convinced me that the two color scheme is better, #26 convinced me that no tic marks are better than tic marks, and #29 convinced me that my thoughts about making some of the words out of focus doesn't work too well (there are so many bad graphics on the Web, that I don't think you can always tell intentional un-focusing).
I'm going to put some of these variations lower in the rankings just to declutter, but know that I do it only because your best variation stands out at the moment.
Thanks again,
Phil
I think you have definitely hit on the idea for the chart. I really like #28, it has good colors, the axis, and everything else I think it needs. I really like the concept, and I can't think of anything else that would improve it.
Thanks for experimenting with other variations, too. #27 convinced me that the two color scheme is better, #26 convinced me that no tic marks are better than tic marks, and #29 convinced me that my thoughts about making some of the words out of focus doesn't work too well (there are so many bad graphics on the Web, that I don't think you can always tell intentional un-focusing).
I'm going to put some of these variations lower in the rankings just to declutter, but know that I do it only because your best variation stands out at the moment.
Thanks again,
Phil
September 27th, 2009, 2:50am
Ok, seems that you like generic stock charts logo better than this. Please let me know do you still want to consider my idea or not so I can move on. Best regards. Wuk
